The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a touching devotion. Aunt Helen sounds like she was a very wise and caring person.
08/20/10
Ver y good devotional thoughts. Discernment is a very valuable tool.
It is true, that we gain strength and insight by the actions of others. You were able to show this well in your journaling/devotional here.
08/23/10
Good piece. I think you could have made a longer story out of it. Let us get to know Aunt Helen better. The use of the topic word in title as well in story several times, can prove to be too much. The upper level writers use discriptive words that mean the same thing. Keep writing!