The Official Writing Challenge
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Betrayal does cause hurt and anger..Thank you for sharing
Yeshua Bless
Wow! That was great. Love the short story aspect. I will admit the dialogue was a bit vague and I was confused at times, but the conclusion wrapped everything up nicely. It is so hard to write a good short story with a small number of words, but you succeeded. Are you sure you're a beginner?
Wow! Good work.

God bless,
I thought you did a good take on this. God bless you.
Sally, this is VERY good. I have tears in my eyes and I'm not the overly emotional reader. I'm amazed it didn't place. I believe you will be in the winners circle soon.