The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
I love what you did with this piece. Very well written. I can tell you know something about music and piano. But, more importantly, you love of God shows.
Ordinarily, I might suggest another name for the entry, but it works well with the way you presented it. look forward to more.

Mona
I'm not very musical, but I could hear the notes of the piano as I read your story. Touching the keys on the piano is a fresh and wonderful interpretation of the topic.
08/17/10
Your description of the piano playing brought me back to the days when I took lessons. I wish I had been able to play like that. I love that part, but when you told us Grace's story, it felt a little intrusive, like you were pulling me out of a wonderful reverie. I wonder if you could have woven it into the playing? Just an idea, I'm not sure how I would have done it.
A hearty Congratulations on your EC win. This is extraordinarily touching with it's message of serving God with a God given talent. The feel good ending of applause and appreciation, was also well deserved, for such a humble heart!