The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/10
I enjoyed your story. Birthdays are a great time to reflect and I really liked that action followed reflection. Good job.
08/16/10
I really enjoyed this entry and the message to all its readers. Forgiveness is so healing for all involved.
This is a great message. You managed to relate to the reader in many ways. I avoid the mirror as much as possible. I also know there have been some grudges held on my part. It was amazing how light one can feel if Jesus is allowed to carry the heavy burden.
08/18/10
I loved the tone of this story. You kept the story very simple but made it profound at the same time. We all have things in our past that we'd like to change and you showed that it's never too late.