The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! What an impassioned plea! It brought tears to my eyes and makes me want to search for the MC and wrap by arms tightly around the hurting soul.
08/13/10
This story was incredible! I felt challenged as a Christian to make sure that I am looking at everyone with His eyes and showing them His love. The progression to the end was exciting as I anticipated the hurt soul coming to a place of surrender and healing.
08/17/10
You not only communicated the deep pain, but you did it with vivid imagery. Nicely done.
Congratulations for placing in the top 10 of your level.