The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
This is a beautiful story. I could relate to your fears and angers. What an excellent lesson.
08/13/10
Well written. Good transitions and I especially loved your vulnerability by sharing your feelings. Blessings-
08/14/10
You have an engaging style of sharing the valuable lessons you learned
With writing like this, I don't imagine you will remain in this level much longer.
08/19/10
Yeah! Congratulations Barb. I'm so happy for you! You keep getting better all of the time.
08/19/10
Congratulations Barb. Great story, fantastic analogy!
08/19/10
Yay Barb!!! :D Enjoy your win!
08/19/10
What a touching story with an amazing lesson!
08/19/10
Congratulations on this piece. A very good lesson.
08/19/10
Congratulations, Barb. Your entry is a great example of "showing". Great job!
08/19/10
Lots of emotion in here-what a good read! Congrats--and an excellent job of how emotionally raw we can be in moments like these. Nicely done!
08/19/10
I'm so grateful for the personal touch of our Father who knows us so completely and yet loves us. Who heals us from the inside out. This is a life lesson you will never forget and one that touched me. Congratulations on your ranking!
08/19/10
Ms. Barbie - you are a terrific writer conveying a powerful message. No wonder you're a winner. Congratulations, Friend! I'm so happy for you.
08/20/10
With your perseverance, you have a winner! This is a powerful story and because I know you I could picture you in the stream lifting the boulders and tossing them while listening to God. I am so happy for you on this placement. I always love your descriptions. Smile!