The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/10
I like your interpretation of the topic. Your dialogue is very good. But I think you could have made the friendship more alive if you given it a setting.
08/16/10
A good story about strong friendships. I wonder if you meant "apologetic" message. Your punctuation could use a litle "sprucing up" for clarity. Nice job on the story. God Bless.
You did a nice job defining what friendship is all about. I yearned to know more about your characters, how they became friends, what their daily life is like. Keep writing you have a great start, I imagine if you could push yourself to use more of the allotted word count, you would have an outstanding story.