The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
Very well written! I like the voice - very natural and comfortable. The double meaning of the title is clever, and the use of the title throughout was effective and not over-done. Your message at the end is also excellent, but some sort of segue would make the transition less abrupt and jarring. I really like this piece, and I'm glad I followed your "stinky" title. ;)
Cat
There's nothing worse than the smell of a skunk unless of course it's a wet dog who has been sprayed by a skunk. Your message at the end was a good one.
08/08/10
We both had "stinky thinking" this week. See "A Parent Has Many Challenges" You did an exceptional job of description. I could almost smell the skunk, and, I've seen a dog react to that situation. The very best part was the ending. Really a great challenge of thought. Great job.