The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. I admire that Miss Hall didn't know the answer, but she was dedicated to find out.
08/06/10
Cute story with guidance on how to inspire children. Read very gently and smoothly.

Tip: double quote marks on conversation. I can tell you have a love for children, and are sensitive to their needs. Good work here. :)
08/11/10
You communicated your message beautifully. I love the way you started with the children, but gave Miss Hall time alone with God to learn the truth. I also like the way you incorporated the scripture.
Congratulations for placing in the top 8 of your level.
08/16/10
Good for the teacher! I love your story. Keep writing.