The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a great job describing all of your favorite smells. I was sniffing along with you as I read it.
08/06/10
Your "smells" run off in many tangents here, making for a loosely wrapped piece. A focus on your son's sense of smell would make an excellent story. A terrific opener too!

Well written and an interesting read. More, more... :)
08/08/10
A little too many smells, but still very interesting. I too, would have liked to have heard more about your son, but each smell did have a great description. You have a great ability to describe.
08/16/10
I walked down the trails with you. Thanks for the smell down memory lane. Keep writing.