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08/06/10
This shows a great childhood. Thanks for sharing with a good story. Keep writing.
This is a charming story although the first part was sweet I wish you had told me more about the MC and Gabe. They are very interesting characters and I smiled when you told the story. I long to hear more about your escapades as a youth.
08/06/10
This story really smells! LOL! You didn't say how old you and your brother were when the skunk event occurred. I bet you grew up fast on that one. Enjoyed your adventure.

The first few comments of babies seemed out of place and used only for fill. Focus more on the skunk part. Overall, a funny read. :)
08/08/10
This took me back to my own childhood when I also tried to do things with my "big brother." Cute story. I liked the way you showed the companionship between brother and sister.