The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
Good story but not on topic. I loved the lesson though.
You did a good job with this. It's a great tribute to Marge.
08/06/10
Your brief synopsis of Marge's funeral service was typical of most services. You caught the gist of the method; good description.

Too many issues and only one pointing to the topic leaves the reader looking for more "smells". A very good memoir of Marge though, "Smell the roses." Good thoughts overall and a bit of editing will smooth out the piece. :)