The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
Good Story,but it did not flow in places. Was hard to tie together. Keep writing though and your punctuation and sentence skills will catch up.
This is a charming story. It does need a little polishing here and there, but it has a sweet message.
08/06/10
A funny story about a hound dog! Yep, they are known to get lost because of their curiosity and lack of comprehension. Your Puck was typical and brought back memories of a beagle we once had. Good story, good thoughts. Bone up on spelling and grammar rules; you are doing well. Create some more stories for us. :)