The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, I love the sitter..She had a great opinion of herself. Little light on subject maybe? Keep writing.
This is a great story. You captured the MC and did her justice with your details. It might be a little weak on the topic, but I like the subtle reading-between the lines and your title that does show how one can think they smell wonderful, but actually they're a little stinky! Good job.
Enjoyed your story. The main character reminded me of my sister, feeling guilty about something she might have done because she didn't do what she should have done. LOL! Needs a bit of editing on sentence structure; overall, very descriptive and a good read. Keep writing. :)
I loved the suspense. What a surprise for your main character amd the reader who didn't know turtles hibernate!
Noooooooo! What a great ending. I'm still chuckling. Your mc indeed was quite a character.
P.S. Loved the was very appropriate.
Cute! Loved the ending. Congratulations!