The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
Wow, I love the sitter..She had a great opinion of herself. Little light on subject maybe? Keep writing.
This is a great story. You captured the MC and did her justice with your details. It might be a little weak on the topic, but I like the subtle reading-between the lines and your title that does show how one can think they smell wonderful, but actually they're a little stinky! Good job.
08/06/10
Enjoyed your story. The main character reminded me of my sister, feeling guilty about something she might have done because she didn't do what she should have done. LOL! Needs a bit of editing on sentence structure; overall, very descriptive and a good read. Keep writing. :)
08/08/10
I loved the suspense. What a surprise for your main character amd the reader who didn't know turtles hibernate!
08/11/10
Noooooooo! What a great ending. I'm still chuckling. Your mc indeed was quite a character.
08/11/10
P.S. Loved the title...it was very appropriate.
08/12/10
Cute! Loved the ending. Congratulations!