The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
Boy, have I smelled these smells. Great take on subject.
08/05/10
This was definitely a different twist on the familiar Adam and Eve. It brought a smile to my face, but even though it had some humour it had a nice message too.
08/06/10
Quite a departure from the norm--and a delightful one. Great take on the topic, and a fun read.
08/10/10
What an original way to tell of the original sin. This would appeal to any age.
Congratulations on a great entry.
08/11/10
Unique take on a well-taught Bible story. Unique take on this week's topic too. Well done.
08/12/10
Very creative! Congratulations!
08/19/10
Loved the way Jesus was described as a rose. It reminded me of the song about a rose that had been trampled on the ground (one of my favorite songs). The mentioning of Jesus being a rose added so much imagery. Absolutely loved it! :)

I also enjoyed the way your story flowed, describing the lovely fragrances of the garden (and all the other aromas of the day)!