The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the comparison of the miner to a Christian. It's so true we may never know what a little act, even something as simple as a smile could change someone's day.
There are some good points here - some nuggets - it's a bit disjointed - but not to the point of not being able to follow - editing would tighten it up.
Good job and thank you for your wisdom
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