The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a touching tribute. I could sense tragedy was coming. You used quite a few exclamation points. You really didn't need them because the words you used showed your excitement for your son. The questions you asked at the end are questions many of us have asked. This was a wonderful look at the life of a beloved.
08/03/10
I like very much the way you carried the same thought throughout the story. It is touching and well written. Good job.