The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/10
Ouch! convicting....great illustration.
07/29/10
It's hard to listen to people, really listen, when we have "more important" things to do. Great job.
This story has such an important lesson that many of us need to hear or be reminded of. You did a great job using such descriptive words.

It would have been easier to read if you had used traditional paragraphs and double spaced between them. It's always a good idea to hit the preview button before you hit submit. It will help you decide if that's the format you want to use.

Thank you for sharing such an important message. I enjoyed and recognized the British words and form. That too is a reminder that the world is such a small one and we are all connected.
What a beautiful reminder to really care about others--to see them through God's eyes.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level!