The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/10
This is a beautiful devotion. You make your point clearly and use excellent examples.

The only suggestion I might have is to break it into paragraphs.

Keep on writing and spreading the news of God's love.
08/04/10
You gave a very clear and succinct message. But I would have liked to hear a story or two (I love stories). You mention your years of experience. Could you tell one of those to support your point?