The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/10
Great descriptions! I rode cross country with my truck driver husband for several years. The road can be a very scary place!
The story about the car crash was well told. i found myself holding my breath. The details of the car spinning on black ice were very vivid and realistic.

I'm not quite sure what the beginning had to do with the rest of the story, but I have a feeling that you accidentally cut off part of the story and Grandpa was going to make an appearance-perhaps as a truck driver?

If this is what happened, don't get discouraged, but I'd encourage you to finish the story and submit it to the general articles page AFTER the judging is over and the results given.

Keep writing it was a great story. (a small editing note no one is two words not one)I really look forward to reading more of your work.
08/04/10
I agree that it was a great story and that the beginning didn't seem to have anything to do with the second part. Actually, both stories were detailed, descriptive and brought me right into the action.