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07/29/10
I relived every step, how my own mama had been lost. Until you have dealt with someone on this level you could not possibly put such meaning into the story. Good job.
Beautiful story, the title caught my eye as I my friend made up the quote, "Love is not blind. If love were blind, God would be blind. Lust is blind."
The story was good, however I was a little confused as to how you introduced Maggie. I thought there were two Maggies at one stage, one his old wife and the other a new affair, however the story sort of sorted itself out towards the end.
This is such a beautiful and sad story. You did an amazing job giving a voice to the family of Alzheimer's victims. It was a touching tribute to all who have gotten locked inside themselves.
A beautiful story about a very relevant topic.
08/03/10
This is heartbreaking and hopeful at the same time. There are those whose love is not blind and who will always be trying to do what's best for those they love. This is a touching article.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level!