The Official Writing Challenge
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Amen, yes, God's word does satisfy our souls. Having in-laws living in Bodega Bay, I was right there with you at the wharf breathing in that fresh salty air!
This is a great little tale. Your details were quite vivid.

I'd suggest yopu read it aloud or better yet have someone read it to you before you hit submit. There are several little errors that you would catch. For example you said caught of the day instead of catch of the day.

I could almost see the sea lions and the whales and feel the salty breeze from the ocean. You took me on a pleasant outing.
07/28/10
I enjoyed your outing and really felt like I was there. Your description of the eucalyptus really brought me back to a place haven't been in a long time. God is indeed good.
07/28/10
I really enjoyed this, could be a scene from a movie, great description!