The Official Writing Challenge
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I would love to be a part of a Biblical times feast. I have heard of some churches doing it, but have yet to participate. What a great idea...having one in a Bible Study. I believe I will be inclined to pursue one now.:)
This was an educational read. I didn't realize some of the symbolism that you mentioned.

Be careful to stay consistent with your tenses. Sometimes they jumped from past to present.

This was an interesting take on the topic. Keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work.
07/28/10
You did a great job of explaining the symbolism concisely, and personally by using Betty's dialogue. I loved your first line.