The Official Writing Challenge
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You're not travelling to new ground with this story at all. It is good but a really great story usually comes from a story that is not the most recreated story in the Bible. A slightly different take though, so kudos for that. And it's not bad at all. God bless.
Whoops, I hit "enter" too soon. You did a good job of showing this mother's heart.
Nicley written piece; the explorations of a mothers feelings under oppresive times expressed well. This earned its 'highly commended'. Congratulations.
Jillian, congratulations on your award in the Level 1 Challenge. Well done. Your re-telling of this story was very good. I'll look forward to seeing more from you in the future. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)