The Official Writing Challenge
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To be called the children of God, we digest faith as we eat the story Love this! And yes I can taste the sweet smell of Victory.
This is beautiful and full of the truth. Remember to cite what version of the Bible you are quoting from. I really liked the dessert line. It gave me peace and calmed my anxious heart.
07/25/10
You certainly have rhythm here! Is this a song? You have the makings for one. Loved the energy you've expressed and good writing skills. Only one boo-boo,(desert=dessert).

Keep writing and taste that victory that comes from the Word of God!
07/28/10
Good rhythm and rhyme in this poem, very consistent. I like the line "Eat a lie you'll taste death, but God's word gives freedom." Great message of encouragement too.