The Official Writing Challenge
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This has to be part of a book, if not, please think about it...I was hooked right from the beginning and really want travel with Rebecca in her new life! :)
07/15/10
This was interesting and relevant to what many may be able to identify with in this economy. Encouraging ending.
07/17/10
Lots of "show" creative writing, very nice!
Very relevant take on the topic. A little editing of typos would help the reader not to be distracted. Keep up the good work and be sure to keep submitting to the Challenge!
Thank you and God bless. Keep writing.
07/21/10
I really enjoyed the descriptive writing and the pace of the story. Loved the ending!