The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the rhythm of this and receive it's message loud and clear. My favorite paragraph being:
Yes, life is a series of choices
The best ones, not always made.
Beware when yielding to voices
The reaper--he shall be paid.

The believe that the way you wrote this makes it a very digestible read for the unbeliever, as it doesn't point the finger at any one person, and it definitely feeds "food for thought" to the the believer as well. Nice Job!
07/17/10
Your poem is very clever and covers many facets of the human condition. Clever interpretation of the topic.
07/17/10
I echo other comments. Well done. Blessings, Ruth
Nicely done! Looking forward to more of your work in higher levels.
Thank you. very easily read. Good message May God bless
Woo Hoo John...Congratulations! Way to Go :)
07/22/10
Well deserved H C. I have read some of you other pieces, Like them all, keep writing!