The Official Writing Challenge
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We all need a Joey in our lives and all Joeys need us. This was heart warming. I loved Joey's kind deed of planting the flowers even though he didn't receive an inviting response from his first encounter with the MC. Also liked the ending, a lot! sure to double space between paragraphs for easier reading. :)
Very good story with a nice flow. You tied the beginning and end together well. A bitter sweet account of people needing people.
So well done. Loved Joey! You did a fine job. Blessings to you!Ruth
Very well told, packed with little truthes, emotions many can relate to, and an uplifting message.
If the paragraphs are not double spaced. I very rarely read it. Keep writing and God bless
Congratulations on 1st place, your talents deserve it.
Congratualtions on your 1st place win with this heartwarming story. Will look forward to reading more of your entries.
A wonderful story. Well deserved first place.