The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 427 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
We all need a Joey in our lives and all Joeys need us. This was heart warming. I loved Joey's kind deed of planting the flowers even though he didn't receive an inviting response from his first encounter with the MC. Also liked the ending, a lot!
Oops...forgot...be sure to double space between paragraphs for easier reading. :)
07/17/10
Very good story with a nice flow. You tied the beginning and end together well. A bitter sweet account of people needing people.
07/17/10
So well done. Loved Joey! You did a fine job. Blessings to you!Ruth
Very well told, packed with little truthes, emotions many can relate to, and an uplifting message.
If the paragraphs are not double spaced. I very rarely read it. Keep writing and God bless
07/22/10
Congratulations on 1st place, your talents deserve it.
07/22/10
Congratualtions on your 1st place win with this heartwarming story. Will look forward to reading more of your entries.
07/23/10
A wonderful story. Well deserved first place.