The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
It flows like a river. Congratulations.
09/13/05
Some of your rhymes and word choices seem a bit unnatural and forced. However, this poem teaches a valuable lesson! We've all been there, and need to be reminded. Thank you!
09/14/05
you must cruise in prayer...well put. You are great with details. The poem just riveted me, and usually I am not a poem-type person. You so captured the hectic pace of our lives! You gave the reader a very accurate and poignant look into your life. Thank you!
This is so cute and so true all at the same time!
09/21/05
Teresa, this was a delightful look at "bon voyage." I know that a lot of us definitely related! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)