The Official Writing Challenge
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It flows like a river. Congratulations.
Some of your rhymes and word choices seem a bit unnatural and forced. However, this poem teaches a valuable lesson! We've all been there, and need to be reminded. Thank you!
you must cruise in prayer...well put. You are great with details. The poem just riveted me, and usually I am not a poem-type person. You so captured the hectic pace of our lives! You gave the reader a very accurate and poignant look into your life. Thank you!
This is so cute and so true all at the same time!
Teresa, this was a delightful look at "bon voyage." I know that a lot of us definitely related! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)