The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/10
This would work for next weeks challenge of "taste" as well. :)

This poem has a great message and although it is short, is packed full of meaning. I especially like these lines! Cast down any imagination, argument or thought
That threatens your freedom, which Jesus has bought
07/17/10
Good poem, almost hymn like. Lots of excellent imagery.
07/17/10
Ahh God's amazing wonderful grace. Well done.Blessings, Ruth
07/20/10
Very well done...
07/20/10
Great poem and message.
07/22/10
This is a beautiful poem that speaks the truth quite nicely.

At times I had a hard time understanding some lines, I think if you added punctuation that would help a lot.

Your passion and love for the Lord shines through in your words. Congratulations in placing in the top 15 of your level.