The Official Writing Challenge
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Eloquently and hauntingly rhythmic! I am in awe at both the beauty of your words and the depth of meaning behind each and every line. Wow!
07/17/10
"An instrument is missing"...
touches my heart.
07/17/10
Written incredibly well; way beyond a beginner's level. Excellent use of language and metaphor. Great flow to a punch in the gut type of ending.
07/17/10
Great title, excellent content, Keep it up. May God Bless you. Ruth
Extrememly well done. Expect to see you moving up quickly.
07/22/10
Much deserved 3'd place! a Moving piece. I could not understand the rythym in one spot but I love the message.
07/22/10
Congratulations on placing 3rd in your level with this wonderfully written poem.
07/25/10
Beautiflly written poetry and such a powerful message.
Too many great phrases to list here. Congratulations and enjoy your wonderful, God-given talent!