The Official Writing Challenge
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Good use of dialogue and good message about how Jesus never gives up on us!
07/17/10
Well done. The dialogue was good. Great title. God Bless you as you keep telling the message.Ruth
Unique presentation of your message, and very on topic.
Great message. I understand some of what we think there is times we may think in swear words. Being an Australian Christian for want of a better term. Mostly here the word "Bloody" is not accepted among christians and it looks wrong in writings. Unfortunately and sadly saying this word in Australia amongst Christians is being more accepted. But yeah,Iknow where you are coming from and your story is a great analogy of what could happen to any of us. Praise God that he does look after us, hey.
Keep writing, I enjoyed it.
Congratulations in placing in the top 15 of your level.