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07/15/10
Through your words you showed us rather than told us of the relationship between a mother and her children. A heart-warming piece.
This is so very tender and left me with both sad and joyful goosebumps. What a clever and loving idea for those left behind. Bittersweet comfort. I absolutely love this story. Can't wait to read another from you!

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07/15/10
Very good story!
07/17/10
Wonderful story, very well written and so touching.May God continue to bless you,Ruth Brown
Heartfelt, on topic, and well told. If you're having problems with the spacing, see my comments on the story just before yours. Blessings,
Okay I'm practically bawling my eyes out. I too lost my mother who was my confidant, my spiritual mentor and my best friend. This piece really touched my heart. I was pulled in right away and stayed at the edge of my chair throughout.
07/22/10
congratulations on 2nd place. I too lost my Mother so I can empathize. Keep writing!
Fantastic! It brought tears to my eyes!

God Bless

C.G. Richardson
08/09/10
Hi Nancy,
After I read your review on my article, I came over to read some of yours. I can hardly see to type from the tears that just keep coming! I lost my sweet mother over 28 years ago- when I had just become a young mother myself. What a touching tribute. Your mother sounds like a wonderfully, special lady. Blessings and hugs- Cindy