The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow....EXCELLENT! You did an awesome job with your descriptions. I felt them all. I was heart sick and numb with you and even felt that joy and embrace of the husband who was alive after all.
07/15/10
Double WOW! My heart was breaking for you, and rejoices with you. Good job.
07/15/10
Great Story! If I were judging, I'd say EC award! Keep writing!
07/16/10
That was really intense! I think you carried the theme very very well. I also could feel my pulse rising throughout the story. Well done!
07/16/10
This was packed with emotions, from lows to highs. You captured me with your sad, raw feelings and I rejoiced with you in the end. This is a winner in my book.
07/17/10
Great Title and it plays all through the story.You are a true story teller. God Bless you, Ruth
Great Story. God bless you.
Well done! Fast moving, emotionally stirring, on topic and a wonderful element of surprise at the end.
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level.
What a breath-holding story. You had such vivid descriptions. Great job.