The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow....EXCELLENT! You did an awesome job with your descriptions. I felt them all. I was heart sick and numb with you and even felt that joy and embrace of the husband who was alive after all.
Double WOW! My heart was breaking for you, and rejoices with you. Good job.
Great Story! If I were judging, I'd say EC award! Keep writing!
That was really intense! I think you carried the theme very very well. I also could feel my pulse rising throughout the story. Well done!
This was packed with emotions, from lows to highs. You captured me with your sad, raw feelings and I rejoiced with you in the end. This is a winner in my book.
Great Title and it plays all through the story.You are a true story teller. God Bless you, Ruth
Great Story. God bless you.
Well done! Fast moving, emotionally stirring, on topic and a wonderful element of surprise at the end.
Congratulations on placing in the top 15 of your level.
What a breath-holding story. You had such vivid descriptions. Great job.