The Official Writing Challenge
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I absolutely love this. What a wonderful, wonderful way to start each day! I am going to print it and do just that. :)
07/15/10
Very nicely done. A great message in this lovely poem.
07/15/10
Lovely poem that can easily be used as a prayer.
07/15/10
Good poem. The last stanza is such a blessing - we need to be tuned in to What God has to tell us all the time. Thank you. for
07/15/10
This is truly beautiful
thank you

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07/15/10
Very clever prose- very well done. It is a beautiful prayer that flows nicely.
07/16/10
Wonderful reminder to all of us. Beautiful!
07/17/10
What a lovely poem. So well done! Ahh to have such talent. God Bless you, Ruth
07/17/10
This poem should be the prayer of every believer.
Gorgeous, powerful wording and right on topic!
Thank you. Great encouragement.
07/17/10
A beautiful prayer and so well written. Great job!
07/18/10
Very beautiful and a gentle flow to the poem.
07/18/10
I really like the message of this. It speaks to me a real need...Father, let me hear You. Thank you for this insightful word.
The emotion in this feels so real and haunting. Great job of pulling me in and holding my attention throughout.
Very well done and anointed...
07/20/10
This is a lovely prayer which should be on all our hearts. Well done using this week's theme.