The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
Another well written, true to form and character poem about a person entering a new life in Jesus. Not original but you definately show potential. Keep at it.
09/13/05
A very meaningful poem. Work on more consistent rhyme and meter (the same number of accented and unaccented syllables in each line). Wonderful story of redemption!
09/14/05
Powerful indeed. The truth is dynamic. Work on the details mentioned
previously. I liked it.
09/14/05
I'm not really into poetry, but I loved the story of redemption!