The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/10
A delightful tale of something so real. I think my favorite part was Mama talking back and forth with Baby.

(I'm guessing near the top, you meant "help mate" instead of "meet.")The story seemed to lag just a bit towards the end, but overall a good piece. Good job!
06/20/10
Delightful tale! It is so true and I love the wise use of time Mama has: her memories and experiences are all the richer for the time she invested in others. (And I know that "meet" is used in the King James version--no worries.)
So very true for a mother and writer. Each must pick and choose and trust in the Lord's leading. I enjoyed your article very much. Good job and keep writing. God bless.
06/24/10
Congratulations on a well-deserved 1st Place. You expressed the real-time life of a writer beautifully!
God Bless. Nancy
Congratulations on doing such a great job. I could really relate to the momma wants baby wants portion.