The Official Writing Challenge
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Simple but touching.
It caught you in from the beginning to end.
06/18/10
Very well written, and powerful. We all need to be more like Jim and make ourselves vulnerable by sharing our griefs, as well as our joys.
06/18/10
A great story. After experiencing a similar experience(though I didn't have to write about it)it really tore at my heart, and have a great appreciation for one who could actually share at the time of his grief. Very well done!
06/20/10
The power of the pen is shown in this story. The town was able to rally and support this writer's journey. I felt this way about a columnist in my own hometown paper when he shared the loss of his beloved wife to cancer. Good story.
06/20/10
The emotion in this story really touched me. Great job on this heartwrenching piece.
A tough story indeed. Very touching and heart felt. Beautifully told.
06/21/10
Such vivid emotion - and certainly a terrible story to have to write. You did a very good job with this.
Congratulations on placing in the top 8 of your level.