The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/10
Such an inspiration Melvin can be to ALL of us. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
06/18/10
Inspirational story, good! Another pass at editing would take it from "good" to "very good."
A real tear-jerker. Lovely story. I especially liked this line "Melvin loved to dwell in the land of the written word". I think that describes all of us writers. Nice work
06/20/10
This touched my heart. It challenges me to look for that something special in everyone. Beautiful story. I agree with the other comment for you to have this go through another edit--it is so wonderfully worthy of a little more polish!It is truly lovely.
Thank you for such a tender story about Melvin, a special child of God who does out shine the stars. I enjoyed this very much.