The Official Writing Challenge
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Such an inspiration Melvin can be to ALL of us. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Inspirational story, good! Another pass at editing would take it from "good" to "very good."
A real tear-jerker. Lovely story. I especially liked this line "Melvin loved to dwell in the land of the written word". I think that describes all of us writers. Nice work
This touched my heart. It challenges me to look for that something special in everyone. Beautiful story. I agree with the other comment for you to have this go through another edit--it is so wonderfully worthy of a little more polish!It is truly lovely.
Thank you for such a tender story about Melvin, a special child of God who does out shine the stars. I enjoyed this very much.