The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/10
Great reminder of what the ultimate challenge should be for writers with Faith.

I had a little trouble with some rough or long sentences - reading aloud can sometimes help find these spots. With a bit of polish and tightening, this piece could shine even more.

Good job!
06/20/10
Great advice about having a soft answer. Hard to do, but worth it.
06/20/10
How true about having a soft answer. Satan only tempts children of the King. If he can cause one to stumble he thinks he has won. God is still in control. Good job and well written.