The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/10
What a sweet, romantic story! And what a handsome character. ;-)

A little polish here and there would help and don't be afraid to put two hard returns at the end of a paragraph/thought so there is an extra space (easier to read here in the Challenges).

I found myself wanting to know the details of this couple's story. Good job!
I didn't think I would find such good writing at the beginner's level, but here it is. Loved your descriptions of the bookstore and the gentle romance. Nice job!
06/20/10
I love the gentle romance of this entry. It is wonderfully told.
What a beautiful tender romance story. You drew me in and held me entranced to the very end. A bit of wisdom. Please put a space between paragraphs. You definitely have a flair for writing. Good job and God bless.