The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful slice of history and extremely well written. I loved this!
06/10/10
Very nicely done, a fictionally story based on true events. Good flow to the storyline.
06/11/10
A well-written story with a twist at the end. Great job writing this piece.
This is an outstanding story. I enjoyed it very much.
I'm such a history geek. I liked this one a lot. It's one of my favorites this week. Thanks for the excellent read.
This is a very interesting and educational piece.

I did notice a few minor editing details, but they can be fixed easily. For example in the first longer paragraph you have a sentence where the word flow is not quite right.

Other than those few minor adjustments, I thoroughly enjoyed your story. You brought the reader back in time and your details gave me vivid pictures in my mind.
Very historical and interesting story. Thank you, I had never heard of a chained library before or medieval book thieves.