The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/10
These boys have a good start for a lasting friendship. I would suggest you remove the title on your next entry because it shows above the story any way (without wasting precious words in the word count). The more you write, the more you will learn how important that will be. Keep writing.
06/10/10
A nice story about friendship. Be careful to proof your work before your final submission. (Ask should be asked and there are quotation marks missing.) Keep writing.
This was a fun story! I like how the two boys were able to help each other out. I too can see a lasting friendship there.
06/14/10
I liked the fun you had with the word pterodactyl. Deliciously innocent and childlike
What a sweet story.
06/16/10
Sweet story! Be careful to proofread your stories before you submit. I also suggest you read your dialogue out loud to see if it flows like a real conversation. Your use of the setting was great.
This is a fun story, with some polishing I could easily see it in a children's magazine. I always thought Pterodactyl stated with a P:) This story reminds me I want to be a librarian when I grow up! It was a fun read and kept me entertained throughout.