The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/10
You have expressed my thoughts and emotions too as I journey in this life - thank you.
The emotions of your story drew me in. Good descriptive words. Very good job. Keep writing.
What a sweet Lord we have!
Beautifully written. So tender and filled with such love and passion. Very well written. Thank you and God bless.
06/07/10
This is a very powerful piece. The last line says it all. God Bless.
You captured the essence of His love for us. I love every part of it. I could see the desk, hear His words, feel the ache of the writer's heart and His compassionate, passionate rewrite.

Great job!
06/08/10
Well-written allegory.

You're a very good writer--I'd encourage you to think outside the box. Several people took the "God as Editor" idea (yours is one of the best).
06/09/10
Even though the suspense was gone very early in the story, it brought a tear to my eye. The truth and it's poignancy kept me reading anyway. Thank you!
06/10/10
Wow, awesome job with this one! A very well-deserved First Place!