The Official Writing Challenge
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You have expressed my thoughts and emotions too as I journey in this life - thank you.
The emotions of your story drew me in. Good descriptive words. Very good job. Keep writing.
What a sweet Lord we have!
Beautifully written. So tender and filled with such love and passion. Very well written. Thank you and God bless.
This is a very powerful piece. The last line says it all. God Bless.
You captured the essence of His love for us. I love every part of it. I could see the desk, hear His words, feel the ache of the writer's heart and His compassionate, passionate rewrite.

Great job!
Well-written allegory.

You're a very good writer--I'd encourage you to think outside the box. Several people took the "God as Editor" idea (yours is one of the best).
Even though the suspense was gone very early in the story, it brought a tear to my eye. The truth and it's poignancy kept me reading anyway. Thank you!
Wow, awesome job with this one! A very well-deserved First Place!