The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/10
Great originality and the twist in the story was subtle enough to cause the reader to think. The ending was very powerful and right on! Nancy K Sullivan
Very creative take and interesting twist. In light of the ending, how sad it would be to have the task of shredding rejected manuscripts!!! I thought this was superbly written, engaging, and powerful. Great job.
06/04/10
Clever and thought-provoking allegory.
Very well written and engaging. I enjoyed the end of the story very much. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
A very creative effort with quite a surprise twist in the story. Keep writing.