The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story shows how we can all make a difference if we can get past ourselves and this perilous world.
Definitely a surprise ending! I love the idea that the opportunities he was missing in his book were really the opportunities he was missing in life. Very creative and very well-written. Great job!
A really clever surprise ending--I didn't see it coming at all. Great twist.

Your story would be easier to read with spaces between each paragraph, even when they consist of single lines of dialog. And double-check for missed or mis-typed words; this sentence in particular leapt out at me:

Joe a sense a purpose...

Top marks for creativity on this one!
Didn't see that ending coming at all - loved it!
Very good story and very enjoyable. Loved the twist at the end of your story. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
I enjoyed reading the story and was definitely surprised by the ending. I also liked ho Joe was being showed how to live a better life by helping out people, by the use of the "written story."
Keep Writing.