The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/10
A very gripping story. It makes one wonder how many warnings we ignore in our daily lives.
Nancy K Sullivan
What an engaging story. I couldn't stop reading until the very end. Beautifully written and good job. God bless.
At first I thought you spelled the title wrong, but now I get it! Haha. Very creative play on words. Very creative story. Keep up the great work!
06/04/10
I love that you wrote a story with an editor as a main character--haven't read one of those yet.

There are some problems here: some missing quotation marks caused me to have to backtrack a few times, and the secretary seems to be named both Janice and Mary.

Love the pun in your title and the open ending--awesome.
You definitely know how to engage us with suspense/conflict, and have alot of writing intuition. Keep writing!
06/09/10
The further I read, the better the story got. And then it ends so abruptly, but pointedly! Love it!