The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/10
Hello, For me, this piece painted a nice picture. I liked how you described the fluffy white clouds changing into charred marshmallows.
I thought that was clever. I like the message about "fog times" as well.
05/31/10
It's interesting how ordinary things teach us great lessons.
05/31/10
Enjoy this very much. Thank you for sharing.
06/02/10
I like your title. Very cute. Good story. Keep writing!