The Official Writing Challenge
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Sail away, sail away... made me thing of that stupid song. That song ruined it for all of us. It really did. But it's nice. Imagery and all that. You're a poet at heart and stick with it - you'll never disappoint in your chosen feild of writing. God bless.
I like the metaphor of life as a voyage Be careful of words like were / we're and your / you're. Lovely imagery in your poem!