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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Bon Voyage (09/05/05)

TITLE: Voyage
By karen McLamb
09/09/05


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Sail away, Sail Away
Oh so true, as we sail away
Balloons ribbons, whistle is to
Were sailing
bon voyage!
And away we go
Looking at the water so low
The ship is so large; you’ll have so much fun
From the bottom, to the top level to look all o’er
Azure seas

Knowledge at the point
Moonlight sets in
Our love pours out,
The fragrant of myrrh air
Brings us joy of gratefulness here
As our voyage sail across the coast,
We enjoy the people most
Of this Blossom breeze
God holds us tight
Blowing a kiss at his children
Never forgetting that we are in his hand

As we end our voyage,
Here we must move on to Paradise
To see our Kingdom, being prepare
Wake Up
Wake up your dreaming my dear!
YES!
The most beautiful dreams ever, so much
Love, faith
I even smell his aroma in the air
On this Spiritual Voyage


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B Brenton09/13/05
Sail away, sail away... made me thing of that stupid song. That song ruined it for all of us. It really did. But it's nice. Imagery and all that. You're a poet at heart and stick with it - you'll never disappoint in your chosen feild of writing. God bless.
Jan Ackerson 09/13/05
I like the metaphor of life as a voyage Be careful of words like were / we're and your / you're. Lovely imagery in your poem!