The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/10
Ah, yes, the learning to let go, truly one of the hardest things of being a writer. You captured the feelings of anxiety, pride and worry just right.

Loved the last line--and glad the MC was able to let go. Nicely done!
Love your title and your poignant message. Especially enjoyed your descriptive third paragraph. You captured and expressed well what I also feel.

05/14/10
I really enjoyed this. Got my attention and held it right until the end.
05/14/10
Very well done. This piece was beautifully written, and the words seem to flow into one another effortlessly.

Loved it.
Loved the title and the story was woven into the title beautifully. Letting go and letting God direct our path.
Excellent writing. I identify with your feelings and thoughts, I felt they were mine too. I hope the best for you with encouraging reviews about your writings. Well done.
05/25/10
Congratulations on taking 3rd place with this engaging entry. The MC's mood was captured perfectly.